Comments on: Reports by 3S…

By: Grace

Grace — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 20:11:36 +0000

I LOVED it! I should have put some pictures in.

From Grace.

By: ella

ella — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 18:45:36 +0000

I read my report to my sister (realising I made some mistakes) and she was very surprised about how the llamas were raised for their wool,meat and skin.

By: reece

reece — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 17:22:19 +0000

report is good a bit more detail would of been good like having photos of the sea animals which would help the listener to understand clearer about the report but good detailing and effort

By: Tom J

Tom J — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 17:15:25 +0000

I have told my Dad what a non chonilogical reeport is.See you tomorrow!

By: Amelia

Amelia — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 15:35:08 +0000

I think it’s fffanantastic! But in each paragraph I could of put more words in.And put more in it so it is ccool and better.

By: Chloe 3S

Chloe 3S — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 13:15:23 +0000

I enjoyed writing the report, but I think it would have been better if I had written a bit more in each paragraph.

From ☆☆STAR-OF-THE-WEEK-CHLOE!☆☆

By: mimi

mimi — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 20:54:25 +0000

Hi MR Shaw HOW ARE YOU Me and my brother
said (Dylan) it needs A bit more information on Muscels and skin.From Mimi

By: Ben

Ben — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 19:17:15 +0000

well done Ben and Macy

By: Josh

Josh — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 18:38:26 +0000

well done David and Josh.

By: shabanna and Grace

shabanna and Grace — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 11:59:23 +0000

Machines
Levers: A see-saw is a example of a levers-machines. The part of the see-saw in the middle where it is protected and where it turns is called the fulcrum.

Off-rode cars:Some cars can be driven off the road as well as on it. This car has thick tyres and a pawerful engine.